Haiku

The young women we work with don’t suffer from a lack of words or stories. They have much to tell and a great need to be listened to. Often it’s hard for them to focus on just one idea or choose few words to describe a feeling or an experience. So, we experimented with Haiku, a very simple style of Japanese poetry. It only has three lines; the first has 5 syllables, the second has 7 and the third has 5.

Here are three haikus about love by one of the young women. [Note: in translating the poems to English, they lost their original number of syllables. To see the original poems, click here.]

1.

I’m not hungry
but I have a strong thirst
for you my love.

2.

You are
an ugly and hateful man
but I love you.

3.

I like you a lot
because you are like
a sweet apple.

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